Wednesday, April 8, 2009

carousel / twaicoo

'carousel'

"cannot figure out
who's ahead n who's behind
on the carousel
the cops and the robbers play
a cat n mouse game" ..

[twaicoo-a common central theme_ on the carousel- with two different (or opposite) perspectives /5-7-5-7-5 syllables/ the last line may or may not echo the first]

/twaicoo-1 /original/z.g.©

1 comment:

Pretty Me!! said...

interesting !! like your words :)