Friday, April 3, 2009

naisaiku week 7

(as jeeves would say)
dear all,

unable to find my cmnt posted yesterday @ 'pretty prats' repeated it today as follows_
--
" hi pretty prats,
was my cmnt as under unable to reach u _

"tears dark with smoke"_
is really expressive-

[_ ' hazaaron tarah ke yeh hote hain aansoo-khushee mein bhi aankhein bhigote hain aansoo-
_nahin jaan sakta inhe yeh zamana ' _ & a crude translation could be -
tears of a thousand kinds_even in joyfulness wet the eyes _the world cannot fathom their depth -
from a great song by 'mukesh' * ] "--

-followed on to the 'naisaiku challenge' & the writeup of 'Andy Sewina aka Danny Wise '_

{& hence this first attempt / kindly forgive the liberty taken with the ' form ' working out with six lines instead of seven}

thousand kinds of tears
the eyes wet with joyfulness
UNFATHOMABLE
the eyes wet with joyfulness
thousand kinds of tears ..

[ credits- original lines from a hindi movie song rendered by the late mukesh kumar mathur */cited for educational purposes only]

/ translation /z.g.

4 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

I love this song. You did well with the NaisaiKu!

If Only Pigs Could Fly

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Hi Zoya, this is the way I usually write them too...

This is spot on!

Wendy Naisa said...

Hiya, thanks for taking the NaisaiKu Challenge? I really enjoyed reading this!!

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Neat ones.

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